Design Review Vignettes This section is focused on what components of intra-jury/studio communications can and often do go awry, |
"The Hidden Agenda" The following incident occurred during the thesis jury of a very good project. The student presented his ideas quite fluently and concisely. The issue in focus here concerns the impact that the past histories / relationships of the participants can have on the tenor of intra-jury communication. As previously mentioned, the student and other jurors can often be caught unaware of the real motives behind certain juror behaviors. I know both `antagonists' in the following excerpt, and am aware of their failed business partnership, and the unresolved animosity surrounding their current relationship. Although their partnership failed years ago, they continue to take verbal `shots' at one another in even the most casual conversations. One is the studio teacher(t) of the student presenting, and the other is a guest juror(g) invited by the Dean, who I think is unaware of the potential volatility of the pairing. As the jury proceeded, both of these individuals appeared increasingly anxious and potentially defensive. They were poised for the attack.... The guest fired the first volley in the form of three rapid and relatively critical interruptions of the student's presentation. They all focused on the `elitist' nature of the student's dining room layouts for the restaurant portion of his design, and they all used a deprecating form of humor to communicate the real message. Although this message was meant for the teacher / juror, it most likely also passed through the bewildered student's psyche on its way to the intended target. Please note the role `protectionism' plays in the following dialogue. In our judgment the criticisms were excessively negative and harsh....the guest then continued.... (g) "So only when you pay high freight you get the view (of the surrounding mountainous countryside), and if you're slurping hotdogs you get zip....(jury laughs, but the teacher is obviously disturbed as he grimaces and leans forward in his chair)....I guess one of the things I'm looking at here....annoys the hell out me in these things. Have you ever been in a high school cafeteria? ....I get that sense in there....it's like the K-Mart of food lines"....(i) (s) "The director (the student's client for this project) wanted even less space"....(i) (g) "It seems to me there's a better solution to eating than to process people in a kind of warehouse environment, and this whole thing of hierarchy of views is a little ....if this is such a good thing here"....(i) (s) "ahh....I"....(i) (g-speaking aggressively) "If you were up there skiing is that the way you 244 would like to eat?" (s) "yes....eat quickly"...(i) (g) "The only view you mention is down this way, and I see stairwells and" ....(i) (t-voice raised) " Well, well I think (juror's name) that is not looking at the pictures he's got up there (points to the student's drawings). This is sort of God's country....anywhere you look is"....(i) (g-to the student) "You have views everywhere?" (s) "yes"....(i) (t) "I mean.....I mean"....(i) (g-angrily to the student) "Maybe your answer should have been, `I have views everywhere' then when I asked you that question?" (t-angrily to the guest) "Well, I mean I'm giving you the answer, and I'm also saying in defense of him (the student) that"...(i) (g-angrily to the teacher) "Partly, partly I don't think it's a matter of defending him"...(i) (t-angrily to guest) "Well no I...I, since I worked on it (the project) for sixteen weeks with him, I may remember something he may have forgotten in the heat of the situation. (g) "OK, right"...(i) (t) "But, it seems to me ahh, ahh....if you find a high school cafeteria that's broken up like that....with level changes and all"....(i) (g) "There are level changes there?" (s) "yes" The jury adjourned soon afterward. In this situation the `protect', although heavy-handed, seems to have defused the conflict somewhat. At the end of this conflict voices were quite loud and the student was on the verge of tears. As the tension escalated, both antagonists seemed to be looking for a way out. The guest's discovery of the 360 degree views and the level changes allowed him a face-saving retreat. The student became a victim of a skirmish he didn't even understand, and I am relatively certain that he felt that an inadequate cafeteria design actually generated the juror's outrage. Instead of celebrating the graduation of a very good student with a very good project into the professional world, they used him as a foil for squabbling.
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"The Bully": I have known and worked with the following individual off and on for several years. He is an incredibly complex individual, full of contradictions and incongruous behavior. To describe him as a teacher and critic is difficult, as he can be sensitive and insightful on one hand, brutally sarcastic and discriminatory on the other. If you are a talented male student your problems with this individual should be minimal. The difficulties usually begin in the studio surrounding his awkwardness in critiquing female students. He would often avoid in-depth discussion of design issues with his female students, and was often quite authoritarian with them in his demands that they follow his guidelines explicitly. In the juries, slight deviations from his instructions could bring harsh verbal abuse, and most of the female students eventually succumbed to the relentless pressure. Their pre-jury anxiety levels were quite high, especially for those who chose to think and design independently. It appeared that this teacher / juror's need for control of his students would often lead him to totally abandon the independent thinkers in the juries and at times even publicly debase their efforts before the other jurors.Tears were common and many of his female students felt as though they were merely drafting up his ideas. It got to the point that a rather morbid tradition developed among female students where a supply of tissues was secretly handed out to each one entering his juries for the first time. As the number of female students began to increase in the nineteen-eighties his discriminatory ways became more apparent. One particularly outspoken and talented female student was assigned to his advanced design studio. The verbal battles were awful between these two, and quite disruptive to the class and juries. Tearful scenes were common, but the student persevered and pinned up an original and very good project for her final jury. Her jury was well attended as the entire school anticipated another fray. As she finished a fluent and well developed verbal presentation of her project her studio teacher immediately began to attack several relatively obscure points in the plan. He then moved on to a more personally oriented attack on women in the profession in general and how they were a disruptive force in the studios. At this point one of the faculty / jury members had heard enough, and grasped the offending juror by his shoulders and turned him to face the student's drawings. He then squeezed the juror's cheeks together between his index finger and thumb and pointed to the drawings with his free hand and said, "Now look at this project.....look at the quality of its presentation and the quality of its thought.....now say the word `good' for all of us, G..O..O..D.....good, I know you can do it". Explosive laughter from the audience and jury followed this scene, as if a huge balloon of steam had burst and gone flying off out of view. Although the `bully's' comments for the remainder of the day were meticulously fair, he did slowly revert to his former ways as time passed. Eventually a group of his female students kept detailed written accounts of his discriminatory practices throughout one semester, and presented these to the University Vice-President for academic affairs. Suit was filed against the school, but was eventually dismissed for lack of evidence. The teacher remains in his position today.Although we see that a particularly strong student was able to combat this teacher's discriminatory practices, we also wonder how much more she could have accomplished given a more positive learning environment. How much energy was devoted to personal defense and anxiety rather than to learning about design and designing? Another relevant question concerns how many alented but less forceful students were overcome by his oppression and either became his `draftsperson' or left the profession altogether? The school's administration and most of the faculty did little to rectify an obvious and long-term problem. |
"Mr. Rhetorical" The following transcripts were collected during the opening juror commentary of a preliminary jury for an advanced studio. There are five other jurors present and a student audience of ten or fifteen. The student presenter's studio teacher is the first to speak although there are four guest jurors present. Informal interviews with the student indicated that the issues discussed by this teacher had been discussed in the studio prior to this jury. The student chose not to respond to his teacher's suggestions to alter his design, and it would appear that the teacher spoke first to bias the opinion of the other jurors in support of his negative views on this student's site design. The teacher then further masqueraded his critical opinions with a very sincere tone of voice and a vague look of puzzlement on his face.The rhetorical questioning then began...." I have a question I would like to ask you....the general attitude you put into the architecture....very evocative and I'm sure it will be exciting....there is in the general site plan a general sense of banality....to the point of being Beaux Arts....ah, a rigidity about it that may have grown out of the program or a series of architectural ideas that you felt were appropriate to this particular project. However, what seems to be slightly perplexing to me....I'm not necessarily criticizing initially....until I know what's going on....is the sense that you begin to introduce a series of very formal gestures here, here and here (points to drawings), and yet when you put them together....when you carry them through they're never terminated or not quite woven together...for example this is a very, very strong axial situation and yet it doesn't end in any discernible axis or center, and yet this is housing and that is housing....same thing is true 216 here. This is a very important place in the scheme, extremely important, and yet you turn (the model) around and look at it here, its not terminated in any axial way, and the gestural moves that you make here at first seem very Beaux Arts and very rigid, and I am curious why these shifts occur....and whether that was part of your attitude about the architecture or at least the site planning aspect of the architecture, or whether it grows out of the project or a desire to loosen it up or not be too rigid,....I think...." The student at this point then asks, "can I respond?" The juror goes on as if the student hadn't spoken.... "you're setting us up for a Beaux Arts relationship and I'm not sure this is appropriate at all here." The juror's final, one sentence statement was all he/she really needed to say if he was not really interested in asking a question. Of course the option exists to truly discover the student's initial intentions without `telling' him what you think he may have been thinking as this juror did. A simply phrased request could have gone something like this, "Please explain the developmental reasoning behind this approach to the site plan." If the student response does not seem satisfactory at that point, the juror can then begin to explain his qualifications of the student's reasoning and design approach. These comments should in turn be followed by some constructive idea building which could eventually include the ideas of other jurors as well. Informal conversations with students indicate that they usually pick up these rhetorical manipulations and realize that the juror does not really desire a response since he/she is obviously in a `telling' frame of mind and not necessarily an `understanding' one. I believe that if this juror had the opportunity to observe this behavior through the eyes of the video camera and the other jurors, he/she would realize that this habit does hinder communication. He/she may even become concerned enough to modify certain aspects of this behavior. |
"The Intruders" The following dialogue begins just after a four-minute-and-fifteen-second student presentation where the student explains a system of analyzing some of Aalto's works which allowed him to generate new design forms using a series of three-degree angles inscribed on the plans. Interruption-type and speakers are coded as follows: Speaker codes precede their comments and are in bold; student presenter (SP), jury leader (L), jurors (2)(3), student audience (SA). Interruption-type codes follow the comments that they interrupt; interruptions (i), power interruptions (pi): (2) "It's not the production of built form, it's too complicated and ..and....it's `prissy' in that"...(i) (L) "It's more than that, you can study endless possibilities"...(i) (2) "You can"...(i) (L) "You can say anything if you draw enough lines"...(pi) (S) "You can't very well draw a line like this"...(i) (L) "Yeah, but let's say that the points you have on that diagram and the number of lines you have and you let x"...(i) (S) "it's not that I have had the time to"...(pi) (L) "No you"...(i) (S) "but at least I'm trying to do"...(pi) (L raised voice) "Hey wait a minute"...(i) S raised voice) "I'm saying I wish I had the time to develop"...(i) (2) "Let me ask him a question, I suspect...(i) (L) "I"...(i) (2) (speaks for twenty-five seconds as he effectively summarizes his thoughts on subject)...(pi) (L) "I mean you want to know how bad it can get, when I was analyzing the Frank Lloyd Wright house, I used a two-foot grid and it was meaningless, but it got us inspired that there was a system in there....so I'm not deriding you for"...(i) (2) "Well no I"...(i) (3) "Wait now"...(pi) (L) "It just has to be more meaningful to actually prove anything"...(i) (3) "No, not necessarily, I mean there"...(i) (SA) "Do you need more analysis"...(i) (2) "absolutely you"...(i) (3) "It's meaningless to compute the size of the angle, especially one so acute, (10 seconds inaudible)....and here's the key"...(i) (L) "Wait a minute"...(i) (3) "and use it in `modulized' form. I want to know whether or not this system (inaudible)...(i) (2) "He has to measure angles and site angles for"...(i) (3) (inaudible five seconds)...(i) (SA) "I think at this point, that"...(i) (3) "He must find ways to"...(i) (L) "But he didn't take"...(i) (3) "He seems to be repeating (inaudible five seconds)"...(i) (L) "but the grade is only giving you a proportional system, its not giving"...(i) (3) "It relates to a proportional system"...(i) (L) "But it doesn't give you a spatial relationship" (3) (inaudible ten seconds) (SA) "I think in terms of Aalto though, I see what you're saying, but I think he might form it with wedges though. He might take the wedges and use them spatially to"...(i) (L) "In practice I think you can start with things you know will work and (continues for thirty-five seconds in an incoherent manner the practical applications of using angles to analyze design)"(SA) "This is something you use after"...(i) (L) "Yeah, use after....I think you have to work on how you put the pieces together....and I like your investigation....It shows the use of layering....but I want to see what the layers are....just to say, `I use the 226 three degree',...just stops me"...(i) (S) "No I"...(pi) (L) "I'd like to see"...(pi) (S) "I have a framework and "...(i) (L) "but there's millions of three degrees"...(i) (S) "but this plan's organized on"...(i) (L) "Yes it does follow the three degrees, but how did you choose your three degrees?" (S) "Based on some spatial ideas I had"...(i) (L) "But what were they?" (S) "The site basically was perceived"...(i) (L) "But how did you put one down, but I think...this is your model here?" (S) "Yes, this is the front, and that idea"...(pi) (L) "What do you mean street or view here?" (S) "ahh"...(i) (L) (sighs heavily) "yeah, ok....I've got no further comments, does anyone else?" (the jury is absolutely non-responsive, jurors appear quite bored and disenfranchised. The student walks away from his drawings and sits down off camera in a very desultory fashion). (SA) "Can I ask a question....I would like to know what other ways we could look at a problem like this?" (L) "Are you asking me?" (SA) "yes." (L) "I'd like to find out what the spatial units are"...(i) (2) "I guess the only difference I have is there seems to be an excessive amount of measuring. (S) "I think that when the brain sees this, maybe the mind doesn't recognize its"...(i) (2) "Let me finish my point....(he proceeds to summarize his ideas in a very clear manner for twenty-five seconds)....(i) (3) (inaudible five seconds)...(i) (2) "Well that's fine but"...(i) (L) "That's fine but also stands"...(pi) (3) (inaudible five seconds, angry voice)...(pi) (L) "But that doesn't tell me where"...(pi) This tit-for-tat interrupting goes on for approximately ten more interruptions, in the one-minute-and-thirty-seconds remaining. It finally dissolves into factional dialogue, with two or three conversations proceeding simultaneously. The jury ends with the leader shouting out, "Who's next?". |